Abstract
Two central struggles facing activist scholars, including critical ethnographers of education, are (a) power relations researchers and participants navigate and (b) dissemination of our work to reach multiple audiences, including study participants and others outside academia. This one-act ethnodrama was written as part of a critical ethnography of a community change initiative. Ethnodrama is an appropriate choice given roles afforded participants and audience in which emotional connections and closeness of data and experience are highlighted.
Below is a one-act ethnodrama (Saldaña, 2005) based on analysis of data from a long-term ethnography of a community transformation initiative, the Coalition for the Children of Lakeview (CCL; described below) in upstate New York. A significant turning point in the initiative was when CCL activists started seeking external funding. Discussions of ways the initiative should be described were fraught with representing the authentic voices of residents while appealing to mainstream media and funders. This was epitomized in contentious discussions about the public release of CCL’s Civic Blueprint (a pseudonym) that had been created through the collective efforts of ~150 people (residents, social service agency staff, school district representatives, local activists, and not-for-profit staff). The ethnodrama, The Initial Ask, is my attempt to capture some of the tensions, commitments, and clashes of culture that were found in this process and throughout the initiative’s efforts to move from the inward-focused work of coalition building to the externally focused work of seeking public and private support (both monetary and political).
Cne-third of the population of this upstate NY county. Its racial/ethnic composition is 43% White, 42% African American, and 16% Latin@, with the remainder being made up of Asian American, Native American, and multiracial people (US Census, 2014). The surrounding county’s demographics are strikingly different: 72% White, 16% African American, and 8 % Latin@, with the remainder being multiracial, Asian American, and Native American people (US Census, 2014). The median household income in the county is ~$52,000; in Lakeview, it is ~$31,000. Lakeview is among the top three cities in the country in terms of childhood poverty, and ranked last in the country in 2012 for African American and Latino males’ high school graduation rates. The county is home to some of the top-rated high schools in the country. Over time, there have been almost innumerable efforts to improve Lakeview’s schools and community health and wellbeing. The CCL was one of those many initiatives; it was designed initially to be unique in its positioning of residents as central drivers of the reform.
The play’s two characters, Dakota and Angel, are composites of participants involved in the design and implementation of the CCL. Following Saldaña’s (2011) approach to dramatizing ethnographic data, and described in more depth below, triangulation of varied data sources illuminated frictions, desires, negotiations, and power dynamics that characterized the initiative. The scene, too, is a compilation based on analysis of interview transcripts, field notes, videotaped meetings, and documents (see Larson, Ares, & O’Connor, 2011, for in depth description of the data and ethnography). Interpretation of the scene and consideration of ethnodrama in activist academic research follow the play.
The Initial Ask
The scene is an upscale office downtown. Angel, an executive for a local not-for-profit funding agency, and Dakota, a local activist and resident of the CCL neighborhood are meeting about funding for a community change initiative, the CCL. They have known each other for a few years through various community projects. Angel had been intrigued with the CCL, hoping it would be an innovative reform, more successful than others the agency had funded over the years. Dakota, seeing Angel as an ally, had requested this appointment to follow up on earlier conversations about the CCL planning phases. Now that there was a Civic Blueprint, Dakota was ready to make an official “ask” for money.
(Lights come up, revealing a medium-size office with an oak-colored wooden desk, a black executive’s chair behind it. A small, round, wooden table with four red-padded chairs sits off to the side of the desk, piled with folders, a calculator, an aging laptop, and an open boxed lunch. Dakota pushes opens the slightly ajar door.)
Welcome! I’m glad to see you! (comes out from behind the desk)
Thank you, grácias. Thank you for your time. What a lovely office! (smiling, sits down, facing the door)
Thanks, it serves its purpose. (smiling, moves to sit in the closest chair, then takes the chair opposite Dakota instead)
Haven’t seen you at the CCL community meetings lately. Y’all right?
Oh sure, just busy. This time of year, you know.
(smiling) Ah, yo se. I know. My group is writing writing writing for money.
(grinning) And we’re reading reading reading requests for it.
How’s your famil/
(interrupting): So. We’re ready to talk … (picks up the sandwich from the boxed lunch, taking a bite; Dakota looks on intently, leaning forward, but then sits back in the chair)
oh … yes … the community has done a lot of good work. (gaze moves again to the sandwich)
Well, yes, it is important work. We’ve been putting money in for years, more than thirty (notices Dakota’s gaze) … oh, have some water. The blight, the crime – we’re losing a generation. Bottom line: It’s got to be about The Children! (emphasis on The Children)
um, grácias, thanks (turning aside to speak to the audience) WE? Who are we? (turns back to Angel) Well, this time is supposed to be different.
Different? Oh. I’d been hearing something … (takes another bite of the sandwich)
Yes, we required that 51% of people at meetings be residents or we couldn’t make any decisions. (sitting up and leaning forward)
um … well (chewing, swallowing)
And other people came, beside residents! I haven’t seen so many since/
(interrupting) but residents? What can, er, er, did they do?
(turns to audience) Oh shit, I didn’t mean that!
Who do you think lives there? I live there! Remember?! (raises voice)
I know you live there! (raises voice)
(To audience: People like this don’t see me) (turns back to Angel) Sigh. They came to lots of meetings, brought other people, youth. We looked at data, planned, worked – It was great! The energy, the talking – so many people! We talked about/
(interrupting) Well, all right. Let’s see what you’ve got.
(confidently offers a bound, book-sized document) The Civic Blueprint – plans, big plans, for public safety, early childhood, k-12, adult ed, housing, youth support. For everyone there. (Angel turns to get a cookie from the lunch box, leaving Dakota holding the document in an outstretched arm)
oh! (turning back to Dakota and taking the document, stunned, leafing through the pages) How many objectives??? Strategies???
(carefully) One hundred objectives. We wanted to be comprehensive, look short term and long term, too.
(softening, scanning through some pages) wow, these are some that I heard about. I love the early child/
(interrupting) yeah, lots of work – it’s about The Children! (emphasis on The Children)
This is why I got involved, like this thing about preschool (to audience: Gotta start early before they’re ruined) (back to Dakota, smiling). And there’s the 100% graduation rate and then the adult education…but that early childhood thing is really important!
Really? (gaze shows surprise, eyebrows arched) Oh… Yes… I have seen you at early childhood events at the United Way.
Dakota, this is like a last stand for some of us about that part of town! (said forcefully)
… Last. Stand…? (voice rising)
it’s been a long time of working, trying/
yeah, tell me about it (to audience: People like this don’t live there!!!)
Wait, I mean it! (voice rising)
I know!! (voice rising)
Aw…(shakes head, gaze dropping down)
(deep breath) Okay, okay. This is the plan and we need to talk money, right?
(briskly) Ah, yes, money. Well, the Blueprint needs to be changed for that
Wait…
Look (pointing to a page), here’s a table about race, non-English speaking, poverty, immigrants/
Yes…
Nobody’s gonna give money to that. You have to know how to phrase it (phrase is drawn out)
But we are black, brown, some poor, some immigrants, originals – a salad bowl!
There’s some socialization that needs to happen. You gotta think about the audience!
Wait/
This whole thing needs to be put into one page, 5 objectives (picks up a single sheet of paper)
(sitting back in the chair, leaning away) What?! How’re we going to strip all that down and away? And who’s gonna do that? Who gets to do that?
Someone who knows how to write to money!
(deep breath) The residents aren’t going to like that.
Do they want the money??? (leaning forward)
Well, sure, but…(sits straight in chair)
Well, then they gotta play this game!
… (drops head, takes deep breath, then quietly in a measured tone, voice rising) But that’s what we thought was going to be different. We listened when people said residents have to take responsibility. That changes the game. Now we’re players, not problems.
Well…
We’ve earned this. The money will be spent well and we’ll track it.
Dakota, things don’t change that fast. (shaking head, voice dropping)
There are professionals living there – accountants, teachers, business owners. We can track the money.
There’s no track record from all those past reforms. The record is not good.
That wasn’t residents, though, Angel. It’s not our fault if you all don’t watch yourselves!
Now, wait a minute! (sits up straight, eyes wide, shocked)
(drops head, deep breath) Pues, todavía es lo mismo! Oh, damn it. Every time, it’s the same! Y’all come riding in on your high horses to save us poor souls. Then you turn right around and leave. Nothing changes!
Dakota, I’m on your side! I know this game!
The game. The game! That game has never helped us! The neighborhood is worse! That game only helps you sleep at night!
Dakota!! (falls back in chair, mouth agape)
Don’t Dakota me! We worked hard on this. You know me. I wouldn’t sign off on garbage! (slaps the document, indignant, frustrated)
Okay! Okay!! I know that. But you gotta understand (voice drops). This isn’t … Aw, well, let me see the Blueprint again. (both soften their shoulders, gaze at each other intently, then they lean in and huddle over the document as the lights dim)
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Who are Angel and Dakota?
As The Initial Ask shows, negotiations around ways to describe the CCL and its residents and appeal to external funders were fraught, represented by the raised voices, control of tempers, and eventual tense return to the Blueprint. The struggle over shared commitments, resident control and positioning, and ways to represent CCL residents in the Civic Blueprint strained the relationship Dakota and Angel had developed over time as people committed to improving the lives and conditions of communities under pressure. The schism between them, between their worlds, serves as a proxy for relationship between the CCL and external governmental, moneyed interests (the references to race/ethnicity, immigration status, socioeconomic status were stripped from the final version). Even the use of the phrase “The Children” had different meanings, with Angel using it to represent those who saw them as the endangered future of the area and Dakota using it to represent those who saw them as the potentially fertile future. Both cared about children and families, which allowed them to talk to each other and to have some common ground from which to negotiate. Such messy, contradictory, hopeful, urgent, and consequential relationships are not easily conveyed in traditional scholarly texts. This short ethnodrama aims to draw readers into the scene, with its sounds, feelings, and air of hope, fear, and strain.
Dakota and Angel were created as composites of participants in the planning and implementation of the CCL. Saldaña (2011) writes, “A composite character may be created when several interviews with different participants refer to similar themes or stories. Thus, the composite character is a fictional creation that nevertheless represents and speaks the collective realities of its original sources” (p. 17). In this case, interview and focus group transcripts, videotaped meetings, and the Civic Blueprint were the data sources from which the composites were created. Thus, Dakota is a composite of 17 people who comprised the group of resident activists, social service personnel, school district personnel, and city government staff that guided the initial planning phases of the initiative. Angel is a composite of local community foundations staff, United Way administrators, City government officials, a partner in a local law firm, and City and State legislators. The prior relationship Dakota and Angel had as represented in the scene captures the reality of social activism in Lakeview—many of the people involved had been active over many years in numerous attempts at community reform. The CCL was yet another attempt, but designed to be unique in its positioning of residents as central actors and as powerful. Dakota-as-composite had been involved from the beginning of the CCL and continued to be central to its development. Angela-as-composite had been involved peripherally and sporadically throughout the process.
Similar to the characters, the scene itself is an assemblage. Returning to Saldaña (2011), “. . . triangulation, . . . relies on more than one information source or type to collect, compare, and corroborate information. Triangulation might also be employed by ethnodramatists to gain a broader spectrum of perspectives or richer dimensions to the story” (p. 23). The scene is meant to embody clashes of sensibilities and world views—dramatically different conceptions of the CCL and the people who live there, power relations among the CCL, and external privileged interests—and the messy mix of shared commitments that ensued when Angel and Dakota negotiated funding for the CCL.
Ethnodrama as (Re)presentation and Activist Scholarship
A central question for this work is: How do the arts help social science research challenge privilege, silencing, misrepresentation, inequity, and help incite people to engage difficult questions that research, by its very nature, can be critically important to helping answer? Ethnodrama is an appropriate choice for disseminating research findings because of the roles afforded participants and audience, creating a venue in which emotional connections and closeness of data and experience are highlighted. Methodologically:
An ethnodrama, a word joining ethnography and drama, is a written play script consisting of dramatized, significant selections of narrative collected from interview transcripts, participant observation field notes, journal entries, personal memories/experiences, and/or print and media artifacts such as diaries, blogs, e-mail correspondence, television broadcasts, newspaper articles, court proceedings, and historic documents. . . . Simply put, this is dramatizing the data. (adapted from Saldaña, 2005, pp. 1-2). (Saldaña, 2011, p. 12)
Beyond dramatizing the data, many ethnodramatists are critical scholars as well. Anna Deveare Smith is the most recognizable, using verbatim interview transcripts in her plays and performances. Twilight: Los Angeles, 1992 (Smith, 1994/2003) and Fires in the Mirror (Smith, 1992) bring two race-based conflicts—after the Rodney King trial and the violence after a killing in Crown Heights, Brooklyn, NY—to the public in ways that foster sociopolitical awareness of the endemic nature of racism in U.S. society. I found this approach helpful in responding to two of the central struggles facing activist scholars, including critical ethnographers of education: (a) the power relations that researchers and participants/co-researchers navigate (Denzin & Lincoln, 2011; Mura & Sharif, 2015; Weiner-Levy, 2000) and (b) the dissemination of our work in ways that can reach multiple audiences, including those who participate in our studies as well as others outside of academia (Saldaña, 2005; Schultz, 2014). During her Presidential Address to the Council on Anthropology in Education, Perry Gilmore (2008) advocates for explicit attention to both activism and our own positions in the academy:
I urge each of us to keep track not only of our own tenure, rank, and promotion records, but also and more significantly, of the successes of the people in the communities with whom we work. We should be judging our worth, not only by our contributions to research, but by our contributions to the advancement of the communities in whose service we are committed. (pp. 110-111)
Shifts in the ways activist scholars engage in research have been happening over several years now: Denzin and Lincoln updated their presentation of paradigms of educational research methodologies in 2011 to include participatory action research, 7 years after publishing their typology that included positivism/post-positivism, constructionism, and critical theory. That this journal is publishing an ethnodrama speaks to the strong influence of these shifts and influences coming from participating communities themselves (Brown & Strega, 2005; Tuck, 2009; Yosso, 2005) as well as scholars who combine advocacy and anthropological approaches to education research (Foley, 2002; Madison, 2011). The crisis of representation that Fabian (1990), Denzin and Lincoln (2011), and others have written about is something the field of anthropology of education is taking seriously.
In moving to playwriting and arts-based representations of data analyses, questions of credibility in dramatic representations of ethnographic data and writing in a script-writing genre pose additional challenges. My own positioning as an academic and as new to playwriting may illuminate some of them, specifically, systematic and rigorous data analysis and working to achieve aesthetic quality in an arts-based representation.
Veteran Scholar/Novice Playwright
I am an academic by training and vocation, so developing skill in playwriting was/is an exercise in humility and wonder. I took a playwriting course at a local literary center that among other things, “offer[s] a setting and forum in which writers, readers, and interested individuals can meet and exchange ideas; assist[s] writers in creating, publishing, and distributing their work; [and] provides occasions where audiences can hear the work of beginning as well as established writers” (http://www.wab.org). In addition to critiques provided by my instructor and classmates, I sent the play to three CCL participants (two residents, one social service agency staff member of the original design team) in the ethnography to support the trustworthiness and credibility of my representation; they said that I had successfully captured the nature of the tensions and negotiations. I also solicited feedback from research colleagues and presented this work at three research conferences (Ares, 2012, 2013; Ares, Fordham, Thompson, & Saldaña, 2011). Trustworthiness and credibility are far easier for me to judge and to affirm than is aesthetic quality. My writing instructor, a local actor, a doctoral student studying arts integration in education, and a colleague with a background in theater pushed me to make the scene engaging as a script, to include vivid imagery, and to give “shape” to the story (i.e., build conflict to a climax and then slightly resolve it). I remain a novice, very much so.
Epilogue
The scene continues to play out in the CCL area and in Lakeview, with different actors but largely the same script. Hopefully, representing our ethnographic data and analyses via a variety of genres (literary, scholarly, performance) will incite people to see the CCL and other such reform initiatives differently than has been the case, to uncover what were invisible bottlenecks and transformative possibilities from new perspectives, and to appreciate the nature and quality of information about such initiatives that creative representations of ethnographies of education can provide. More broadly, ethnodramatists write in the hopes “that constructive community reflexivity and dialogue can emerge among audiences after viewing their productions. Many of these playwrights also maintain explicit social justice or social change agendas, hoping that their events serve as cautionary tales for the public to never let the inequities portrayed in their plays ever happen again” Saldaña, 2011, p. 31). Ambitious, yes, but, I believe, critically important.
Footnotes
Declaration of Conflicting Interests
The author declared no potential conflicts of interest with respect to the research, authorship, and/or publication of this article.
Funding
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